Corrections To Make
To work more as a 'To Do List', I've decided to write out all the corrections that need be undertaken.
- Smoothen D's inner bowl.
- Lower F's crossbar.
- Reduce steepness of G's inner curve, then replicate with C.
- Take some weight off J.
- Reduce width of K.
- Make L slightly longer, adding thickness to serif?
- Take weight off M, possibly add ink traps.
- Redraw Q's tail?
- Adapt weight of the S, and adjust the angle.
- Reduce width on V.
- Reduce width on W, take some weight of central area.
- Increase the width of 1's serifs.
- Use 3's serif on 2.
- Reduce weight at top of 3, and add stability on curve.
- Reduce 5's counter, possibly add top serif. Also add stability.
- Add stability on 6, as well as serif. Duplicate with 9.
- Add stability in centre of 8, and reduce in other places.
Smoothen D's inner bowl:
Lower F's crossbar:
Take some weight off J:
Reduce width of K:
Make L slightly longer, adding thickness to serif:
Adapt weight of the S, and adjust the angle:
Reduce width on V:
Reduce width on W, take some weight of central area:
Increase the width of 1's serifs:
Use 3's serif on 2:
Reduce weight at top of 3, and add stability on curve:
Reduce 5's counter, possibly add top serif. Also add stability:
I also experimented with adding an upper serif, but decided it was too distracting.
Add stability on 6, as well as serif. Duplicate with 9:
Increase the width of 7:
Add stability in centre of 8, and reduce in other places
After looking at the rest of the characters, the 4 needed some weight added:
